Writing Prompt #8

Some days carry you from
One state to another
Without you having time
To get what’s going on inside

You’re building chaos
Till the cup of your day
Overflow with a strong mix
Of anger and irritation

If only you could remember
That it only takes
One breath
To change focus
And sooth your stormy brain

This is my piece of poetry as part of Writing Prompt proposed by Mona.

7 thoughts on “Writing Prompt #8

  1. balroop2013 January 24, 2020 / 7:31 pm

    What an apt response to the prompt! Well-penned!
    We just say “one breath” to sooth or to change focus Marie; a poetic rendition of hope and hope is the only choice we have. We know it takes much longer, sometimes a whole life to usher in the changes we wish to bring into our lives. Perspectives do change if we keep the hope alive.


    • Latmospherique January 28, 2020 / 2:05 pm

      Yes Balroop it does take much longer.
      But as you say as long as we have hope…

      Thank you very much for your appreciation

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Antony H. January 24, 2020 / 10:31 pm

    I have been noticing this about myself lately and now you wrote about it! Great one 🙂


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