Writing Prompt #13

We know deep inside
That the world can burn itself
So many men full of pride
Trying to mess up with life and death

We may stand alone in this place
Where hearts are hard
And shortened is our breath

But if we can hold our hands in the midst of chaoas
And if our eyes can meet in the turmoil of pain

We will have found the key
That unlock the doors of eternity

This is my piece of poetry as part of Writing Prompt proposed by Mona.

10 thoughts on “Writing Prompt #13

  1. Manic Sylph July 17, 2020 / 7:08 pm

    So true… Felt this deeply. Your words have such depth to them.


  2. lisa thomson July 18, 2020 / 1:44 am

    Very powerful message, Marie. Amazing response to the prompt. ❤


    • Latmospherique August 14, 2020 / 10:33 am

      Thanks a lot Lisa!
      I like prompts for they give me the opportunity to dig deep inside.

      Liked by 1 person

  3. carrie4myself July 18, 2020 / 3:28 pm

    If we can hold our hands, it could unlock the doors of eternity…. ❤ ❤ so true
    Wish it could be done!!! xxx


  4. Yiena July 18, 2020 / 9:20 pm



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